Floating Purple Flower
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Floating Purple Flower
Is this a good description? Is it appealing?
Rows And Rows Of Slowly Rolling Hills With A Beautiful Forest Carpeting It, Tall Trees With Dark Bark And Mysterious Vines Hanging About, Bushes With Spectacular Fruit Hanging Off Them, And The Sky A Deep Sunset Orange And Pink Underlying Soft Wispy Blue Clouds As The Sun Glowed Red And Refleticed Purple. While A Soft Misty Floated About The Scene Through The Impentrable Lush Deep Green Tree Tops Bird Singing And Dipping In And Out Of It, While Butterflies Of Exotic Pruples And Neon Blues And Soft Pink Floated About On Roses And Orkedes And The Many Antorages Of Foriegn Flowers, All The While In The Far Distance The Sun Lowered Below Great Purple Peaks Fluttered With Snow.
wHATS wITH aLL tHE cAPITALS?! 
It's a good start, but it's not great..YET 
Avoid "with"; it tends to be a poor word that stops you thinking of GREAT words.
Don't repeat stuff like "rows and rows" -- especially if it's a common thing for people to say, but something you don't usually see in writing. You should use something more literary, like "endless rows" or even, simply, "many rows".
Watch your spelling: refleticed is not a word. Neither is Impentrable.
I think rows and rolls might be related words that were once spelt the same way, but the spelling changed. Just guessing though. If not, they at least sound too close, so I wouldn't mix them.
Try to build a rhythm in each sentence, building to a crescendo (like how music builds in the strongest part of a song). This is hard to explain, but you'll get a feel for it if you read others' works closley and write while saying the words back to yourself. Ursula K. LeGuin's book on writing, called Steering the Craft will help with this.
Let's see... I would try something like:
Rows of gentle hills and valleys stretched endlessly toward the horizon. A beautiful forest of tall trees carpeted each, their deep brown barks draped lazily with mysterious green vines. Under the canopy, lush bushes were dotted here and there, their branches straining with burden of spectacular fruits...
Hopefully you can see the kind of changes I've made here, and continue more along those lines.
Good luck
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